The imagery here really builds as you go along. By the time it reaches the last four words, you can feel each raindrop hit as they beat to your message. There's also a vivid contrast between sunlight and rain, like fire and water, becoming part of the one person that seems to be observing this scene from beneath the roof. Very powerful, great job!
The imagery here really builds as you go along. By the time it reaches the last four words, you can feel each raindrop hit as they beat to your message. There's also a vivid contrast between sunlight and rain, like fire and water, becoming part of the one person that seems to be observing this scene from beneath the roof. Very powerful, great job!
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